OK,

This piece is for Wolvris, who was the winner of my 20k page views kiriban!

This may not be exactly what he was after, so there may be a couple edits forthcoming, and I want to reinforce the fact that this is now his property (or will be when he approves the final copy at any rate) and that it is posted here with his permission.

Please know that it is a little dark, and there is some language. It is however, a small piece of a much larger planned whole. In speaking with Wolvris about it, I think the completed project will be incredible, and while dark, will also have some interesting humor and philosophical/social commentary, in a sort of tongue-in-cheek style. I hope I can be a part of it as it progresses!

Oh, also another small milestone for me here. This is my 200th deviation!

So, congratulations to you Wolvris, and please let me know if you'd like to make any changes!

***Slight edit, per Wolvris' feedback. I changed the scene in the driveway to better explain why the car wasn't used as an escape vehicle (seemed obvious to me at the time, but once it was pointed out to me that not everyone could see inside my head, it seemed even more obvious to explain it a bit), and a bit in the cabin concerning Limon's name, which also, hopefully, helps clear up the bit at the end about Limon's dad.

Anyway, let me know!***